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Mia's back story~Page 2

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First part of the descriptions not really related to the comic thing bellow. I'll put the words again, like last time. As I said, her backstory's a little messed up.

If I ever make like random little comics or what ever, they'll probably either be based around random things to show them interacting, or possibly showing more about the character. For example, I personally try to put real world issues on characters, {If it's something like depression, I read about it first of course.} so like, someone may have some kind of eating disorder or something. I don't know. It's sort of the same thing when it comes to why I try to make it so most my character's aren't necessarily thin. I'm basically giving them flaws I guess. (Not that being fat's really a flaw honestly.)

I'll probably do a fear chart thing with them tomorrow. But first, part two of this comic. Also, you can still ask questions by the way. The Q & A's always open.

Question: "What's Mia's back story?"
Asked by:+Johnny Cenate Jr. 


For bellow:
Any thing that's italicized is a thought
Anything that's just normal text is just narration
Anything in "quotations" is someone speaking. 

Text:
19. "If I just took better care of myself I.. She..."

20. "Crystal, your health isn't your fault, and you know it's not. You've always had problems. There isn't much you can do about that either."
"But... I.."

21. "No. If anyone is to blame, it's me. I should have kept her with me...Or at least went to her while they were taking you away..."

22. "I-I...."
Beep Beep Beep Beep 

23. Kiss
Beep Beep Beep.
"You need to calm down..."

24. "I-I miss her..."
"I know. I do too... Missing posters are every where through out the city, someone will recognize her..." 

25. Beep Beep.
"If we can't find her.... You know I can't have another kid.... And we both know you can't at all... But I don't want another kid any ways....I want our daughter Jane. She's probably so lost..."

26. Beep Beep
"We'll find her. I promise...."

27. They didn't feed me very much....
"Hungry..."

28. I got water everyday... And bread every week...? I'm not sure... I sometimes got cheese too...

{Sorry to switch tense. I kept forgetting to keep it in past tense.}
29. I think I'm eleven now... My birthday was coming up when I was taken... I think four months have past... 

30. I'm thin now... But, not in a good way. It's gross... I don't like it...
My dress is too big... It doesn't fit...

31. My nails are longer... And sharp, so I sometimes hurt myself by mistake. (<--- Blood {pointing at arm.})
"Ow... Hurts..."

32. The cuff... It hurts my ankle. It bleeds when they take it off sometimes... It's damaged...

33. I can't sleep very well either... It's cold... And the dark scares me...
"Mommy...."

34. When they make me do chores, they lock my hands together...

35. Or they chain my ankle to a heavy ball... It made it hurt to move...

36. a weak, starving child, could have a small chance of escaping without help...They knew what they were doing... But why?
"We have to."

37. "I can't carry it alone. You have to come with me."
"But what about her?"

38. "She's asleep. She can't get out of that cuff any how."
(She's using the dress as a sort of blanket.) 

39. "Come on."
She dropped the keys....

40. Yawn
"Hm....? Shinny...?"

41. "Key..."

42. I unlocked it...I wasn't chained to anything... But I felt weak... And my ankle... It hurt so much...
Click

43. But I could leave.....

44. I found a ribbon. Now my dress won't fall anymore...

45. And soon... I was out side... It was sunset...

46. But then..
"What the-?!"

End of page two

Sorry if anything looks weird. I have no idea how I drew the hands in box 31 so well {Well, "so well" in my eyes.}.... Also, just to be clear, just in case, a female-female couple can produce a baby, but with only one parents genetics. Similar to male-male couples, just male's usually can't hold a child. Transgender one's can. I mean, it's gonna sound weird, but if one of the females have a brother, then you can get both side's genetics... But yeah. That just sounds awkward... 
Ehh... Never mind
Image size
2370x3077px 1.88 MB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
u850SW,S850SW
Shutter Speed
1/15 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
1600
Date Taken
Nov 30, 1999, 12:00:00 AM
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